This novel had me all up in my feels. Laughing, raging (on behalf of the characters), falling in love, and fucking crying! I like to think I'm like the MC but I'm probably more like Brad and Brad would defo love this novel. 5 stars
Sorry. The person the usually makes them every update decided not to continue making them anymore. So I need to see if someone else will or I might just make one myself. Sorry. I think there a walkthrough mod floating around the internet though.
Haha, no. My high schools colors are black and orange, so I decided to make it the same colors. So I was just looking for logos with those colors. Although, I wish I didn't make the lockers orange in the game. It's kinda an eye sore. 😅
No I haven't wrote a single fucking resume nor did I attempt to look for a job, why? Coz I'm a fucking <insert name>... But still yes, I do agree with this heartfelt review of yours. This game has given my suicidal ass a reason to live a few more years just to see this game through.
So in the first chapter the MC is talking about Tiffany and says "I know she's a cool landyland..." is that a typo or what the fuck is a landyland lol.
Lol, saw an emote on discord that was Darci's face, but it was used in a thread on the OiaLT server. Feel like there's a lot of crossover and practically collaboration between the creators of these games.
The new update didn't actually update. It saved as a new game with no saves. But I transferred my save game to the new Ripples folder and it worked out fine.
Bob gave me a proper laugh-out-loud moment. If you've played it then you know what I'm talking about!
I'm looking forward to the next update as the mystery is deepening...
Having issues installing on my android, app won't installing (it'll download) also been Having issues updating from prior I have to delete it to install them. I love the game this is the only flaws I've had
Same thing here. It downloads just fine and wont install at all.
Actually the downloads are not finishing. It was showing up in my files before finished and even after letting a fresh download sit for 15 minutes its said unsuccessful. Something is wack with the android option.
Go into your system files and make sure to completely uninstall the program. Sometimes if you don't do a full clear out in Android, attempting to reinstall will cut out after the initial download completes, without successfully mounting and installing the APK.
Omg, another update. This game has been my in my top 3 AVN game (Summertime saga and Once in a lifetime are the others) and it has been so much fun to play this. I dont know if I should wait for the next update before I download it again but surely if I could rate this game again for a second time, another 5 stars.
so i already did an review once but now that i finished the update i have to say, this game just keeps getting better and better. Honestly this games story writing and charters are so much better than any ive have encountered in other Visual Novels. If your thinking about trying this game DO IT! It will not let you down. And now im hyped for the next update!
Congrats played the hell out of this game and finished it in a sitting. Its amazing. A job well done for sure. Maybe my favorite game on it has to be honest.
so im wondering who was the girl asking for help when you first run into the tunnels to go to the power plant for the first time? it kinda annoyed me that the MC just ignored it.
While it is rather annoying that he just ignored her, there could be a simple explanation for that, for example imagine its the middle of the night, your in a dark forest, (cant remember if he had already seen the entrace or not) and you hear a loud random scream from a voice you cannot recognize, sure it would make sense to go after her, but at the same time you have no idea what you might get into
he first heard the girl scream and started looking for her and then he found the door. i mean if he already committed to look for the girl then at least try before giving up. he just forgets about the girl and he has a "meh" reaction after he found the door. but after playing the story a little bit further the girl screaming mightve been an attempt to lure us to the door
this was my theory, the mysterious masked person (no spoilers) probably used what he knew would attract me the most - a damsel in distress to rescue for the sex-rewards. Desperate rescue girls are the best <3 even better than rescue dogs.
Couple of things I noticed in the text that you might want to have a look at. Apologies for wasting your time if you have already fixed them.
Tiffany "Okay, I will you tell the story about how I met your father." should be "...tell you..."
Tiffany "I immediately started busting up in laughter. I've never heard anyone talk to their car like that." should be "...I'd never..."
MC "(I know she's a cool landyland thats not easily embarrassed, but still.)" should be "...cool landlady..."
Krystal "Last week, my friend Daphne and I landed on a movie about musical instruments that kill people, i think it was supposed to be a horror movie but laughed the entire time." should be "...we laughed..."
MC "(This doesn't make sense. If he's not at New Angeles University, he should be worker there.)" should be "...a worker..." or "...working..."
MC to Khloe & Jenny "Well, if it's to help Jenny out, I might be about to help." should be ",,,be willing to..." or "...be able to..."
Jenny "I'm want to do it again, but this time I want you to push my head Khloe." should be "I want..."
MC "(I have a couple of dollars left, so maybe I can grabe a snack and head to park until she gets out of class.)" should be "...head to the..."
Tiffany "I even called the police, but they wouldn't do anything because the person missing has to be gone for at least twenty-four hours before they will file a missings person report."shoudl be "...missing persons..."
Skylar "Your so deep, and it's so good!" should be "You're so..."
Krystal "*Sign* The frozen one worked, ..." should be "*Sigh*..."
MC "After kissing, the next thing you want to do is move to the neck and give soft and gently kisses like this..." should be "...gentle kisses..."
MC "She got bullied when she younger and sometimes still does. That's the last thing I need is for you to do the same." should be "...she was younger..." and "...does. The last..."
MC "(Okay, Daphne definitely wants hop on my pogo stick..." should be "... wants to hop..."
Thanks for the typos. Yeah some of these have already been fixed. I am hiring a professional proofreader next update. My old one didn't do a very good job. I'll fix the ones I don't have and have them corrected in the public release update coming up on the 18th.
As a hardcore fan of both fap VNs and Dark, this is great.
Once I saw where the game was headed, I considered restarting and renaming myself Jonas Kahnwald just to see if you had put some Easter eggs in, a yellow jacket, maybe.
I am hoping that the MC will end up outdoing Bartosz and be ground zero of pretty much everyone in town, Scarlett being the first of many. Maybe he can outdo Charlotte and become his own father. Maybe his own grandfather, too.
I didn't look to closely at the layout of the rooms in your story, but that is just one of many possibilities for Easter eggs that won't break copyright laws. A mobile home by a truck stop, lots of rain and no umbrellas, a watchmaker's shop...
I am very much looking forward to seeing how this all progresses. Keep it up, Jestur :)
Haha! Yeah, Dark is amazing. As much as I want to copy the greatness of Dark, this story will be different and not as crazy of a character tree. There's no way I can write a story as masterful done like those two did. I did take some inspiration from Dark, of course, and tons of other similar media, but I'm trying to make it somewhat unique. I'm glad your enjoyed it and I'll try to sneak some more Easter eggs in, in the future. Thanks for playing!
Recommendation: don't start with a wall of backstory. I know many do it, but not bc it's good, rather bc it is easy. It's very poor narrative, and also completely unnecessary. All the info comes naturally in the story when relevant, sometimes with just a lil tweak.
Yeah, I agree. I already plan to remaster ep1 and I want to do away with the disposition as the beginning and slowly put the information into the first episode. I have no writing experience and this is my first attempt so I'm learning as I go. I know it's pretty dumb to try to start with a story like this. But hey, we learn from our mistakes. Thanks for the recommendation. I hope you enjoyed the game.
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this is one of if not the best 3d visual novels ive seen cant wait for the next update
Wow, thanks Anon. I'm glad you like it!
Can't wait for he next chapter! 5/5
Also that Bob scene, rip u_u.
bruh, tf moon and darcia be vibin doe @onceinalifetime
Holy shit i just finished that game a couple days ago and i didnt notice that
There's also Deviant Anomalies Character infront of Darci
Is there NTR in game?
No there isn’t
This novel had me all up in my feels. Laughing, raging (on behalf of the characters), falling in love, and fucking crying! I like to think I'm like the MC but I'm probably more like Brad and Brad would defo love this novel. 5 stars
Is there a walkthrough pdf for episode 3 part 2 ?
Sorry. The person the usually makes them every update decided not to continue making them anymore. So I need to see if someone else will or I might just make one myself. Sorry. I think there a walkthrough mod floating around the internet though.
Thanks
Did you by chance go to OSU? I ask that because of the school. I'd recognize that sport logo anywhere.
Haha, no. My high schools colors are black and orange, so I decided to make it the same colors. So I was just looking for logos with those colors. Although, I wish I didn't make the lockers orange in the game. It's kinda an eye sore. 😅
I'm absolutely loving this game so far, and I can't wait for the next episode!!
i just want too ask if there will be ntr or heavy drama in certain choices
No ntr. There may be drama no matter the choice, but no really heavy drama
Thats fine i just hate when games give somethingblike a neighbor that causes over the top drama with no warning or background to it
Your comment made me laugh and indeed ripples is the real deal
No I haven't wrote a single fucking resume nor did I attempt to look for a job, why? Coz I'm a fucking <insert name>... But still yes, I do agree with this heartfelt review of yours. This game has given my suicidal ass a reason to live a few more years just to see this game through.
So in the first chapter the MC is talking about Tiffany and says "I know she's a cool landyland..." is that a typo or what the fuck is a landyland lol.
Also, MC has great taste in AVNs lol
Is this scene an easter egg for Judie from Once In a Lifetime like Caribdis did once?
That face is unmistakable lol. Also, you can actually see OIAL in MC's library in chapter 3, albeit blurry.
The camaraderie of all these adult game devs are truly admirable. Respect...
Lol, saw an emote on discord that was Darci's face, but it was used in a thread on the OiaLT server. Feel like there's a lot of crossover and practically collaboration between the creators of these games.
The new update didn't actually update. It saved as a new game with no saves. But I transferred my save game to the new Ripples folder and it worked out fine.
Bob gave me a proper laugh-out-loud moment. If you've played it then you know what I'm talking about!
I'm looking forward to the next update as the mystery is deepening...
I'm glad you got it to work out. Android builds are always a struggle to get working flawlessly. I'm happy you enjoyed it.
The limit of my programming knowledge began and ended with:
on the Spectrum 48K many years ago. So I am in awe of anyone who can put together something for me to play with or without flaws.
Thanks for all your hard work :)
Am I doing something wrong? I get to the end of episode 1 and I'm back to the main menu. Isn't there supposed to be 3 episodes?
Yes, there are three episodes. If you have a discord account, stop by my discord server. If not, message me and I will try to help you.
thank you I reinstalled and had no issue. Sorry for the delay in response.
awesome game!!
Having issues installing on my android, app won't installing (it'll download) also been Having issues updating from prior I have to delete it to install them. I love the game this is the only flaws I've had
Same thing here. It downloads just fine and wont install at all.
Actually the downloads are not finishing. It was showing up in my files before finished and even after letting a fresh download sit for 15 minutes its said unsuccessful. Something is wack with the android option.
Was thinking that maybe a coding error
Go into your system files and make sure to completely uninstall the program. Sometimes if you don't do a full clear out in Android, attempting to reinstall will cut out after the initial download completes, without successfully mounting and installing the APK.
Omg, another update. This game has been my in my top 3 AVN game (Summertime saga and Once in a lifetime are the others) and it has been so much fun to play this. I dont know if I should wait for the next update before I download it again but surely if I could rate this game again for a second time, another 5 stars.
It's worth playing the new update. It's a good size update and I worked hard on it. I don't think you'll be disappointed. 🙂
definitely download! a bunch of new story, great foreshadowing.
Jestur, my man! You have outdone yourself with this one! 🌹🌹🌹
Thanks ☺️
For me, this update is very good, im looking forward for it. Btw, anyway to support the game (ex from patreon or itch) let me know. thanks.
Thanks for the new update! It just keeps getting better and better! Great work.
so i already did an review once but now that i finished the update i have to say, this game just keeps getting better and better. Honestly this games story writing and charters are so much better than any ive have encountered in other Visual Novels. If your thinking about trying this game DO IT! It will not let you down. And now im hyped for the next update!
Im looking forward for more !! Thanks, it is a great game.
can anyone help me in getting the 12th scene? (i think its the ice cream one) Xd
Thanks in advance uwu
You need to be on Krystal's Route to get it and then agree to go with her when she asks in the school hallway.
I could say a lot of good things about the game but the best thing is to play it. 10/10
Great Game I cant wait for episode 4
Congrats played the hell out of this game and finished it in a sitting. Its amazing. A job well done for sure. Maybe my favorite game on it has to be honest.
Out of curiosity, but I heard the game has incest, exactly what kind?
Its minimal. Two of the characters are the landlady and her daughter that you live with. your father had some kind of relationship with the landlady.
so im wondering who was the girl asking for help when you first run into the tunnels to go to the power plant for the first time? it kinda annoyed me that the MC just ignored it.
While it is rather annoying that he just ignored her, there could be a simple explanation for that, for example imagine its the middle of the night, your in a dark forest, (cant remember if he had already seen the entrace or not) and you hear a loud random scream from a voice you cannot recognize, sure it would make sense to go after her, but at the same time you have no idea what you might get into
he first heard the girl scream and started looking for her and then he found the door. i mean if he already committed to look for the girl then at least try before giving up. he just forgets about the girl and he has a "meh" reaction after he found the door. but after playing the story a little bit further the girl screaming mightve been an attempt to lure us to the door
this was my theory, the mysterious masked person (no spoilers) probably used what he knew would attract me the most - a damsel in distress to rescue for the sex-rewards. Desperate rescue girls are the best <3 even better than rescue dogs.
really awesome games...congrats for the amazing job cant wait for see more keep up the great work guys...
Great game, great girls. Undisputed 5 stars
shame, i gave it a full 100/100 stars.
5/100 stars is just insulting
Couple of things I noticed in the text that you might want to have a look at. Apologies for wasting your time if you have already fixed them.
Tiffany "Okay, I will you tell the story about how I met your father." should be "...tell you..."
Tiffany "I immediately started busting up in laughter. I've never heard anyone talk to their car like that." should be "...I'd never..."
MC "(I know she's a cool landyland thats not easily embarrassed, but still.)" should be "...cool landlady..."
Krystal "Last week, my friend Daphne and I landed on a movie about musical instruments that kill people, i think it was supposed to be a horror movie but laughed the entire time." should be "...we laughed..."
MC "(This doesn't make sense. If he's not at New Angeles University, he should be worker there.)" should be "...a worker..." or "...working..."
MC to Khloe & Jenny "Well, if it's to help Jenny out, I might be about to help." should be ",,,be willing to..." or "...be able to..."
Jenny "I'm want to do it again, but this time I want you to push my head Khloe." should be "I want..."
MC "(I have a couple of dollars left, so maybe I can grabe a snack and head to park until she gets out of class.)" should be "...head to the..."
Tiffany "I even called the police, but they wouldn't do anything because the person missing has to be gone for at least twenty-four hours before they will file a missings person report."shoudl be "...missing persons..."
Skylar "Your so deep, and it's so good!" should be "You're so..."
Krystal "*Sign* The frozen one worked, ..." should be "*Sigh*..."
MC "After kissing, the next thing you want to do is move to the neck and give soft and gently kisses like this..." should be "...gentle kisses..."
MC "She got bullied when she younger and sometimes still does. That's the last thing I need is for you to do the same." should be "...she was younger..." and "...does. The last..."
MC "(Okay, Daphne definitely wants hop on my pogo stick..." should be "... wants to hop..."
Looking forward to the next release.
Thanks for the typos. Yeah some of these have already been fixed. I am hiring a professional proofreader next update. My old one didn't do a very good job. I'll fix the ones I don't have and have them corrected in the public release update coming up on the 18th.
Thanks and good luck with the release. Fingers crossed.
Games good so far I am enjoying it. Can't wait for next chapter. Keep up the good work
Bro i need a gamesave of chapter 3, i miss click and save the start of the game
If you have a discord, stop on in. I'm sure someone will hook you up.
thx
What's the deifference between the normal apk and the compressed apk?
30 fps animations instead of 60 and more compressed images.
Eh, i like the 3d model, they look gorgeous and don't looks weird, the story is alright, it's enjoyable.
But the graphics alone make it worth it to play
As a hardcore fan of both fap VNs and Dark, this is great.
Once I saw where the game was headed, I considered restarting and renaming myself Jonas Kahnwald just to see if you had put some Easter eggs in, a yellow jacket, maybe.
I am hoping that the MC will end up outdoing Bartosz and be ground zero of pretty much everyone in town, Scarlett being the first of many. Maybe he can outdo Charlotte and become his own father. Maybe his own grandfather, too.
I didn't look to closely at the layout of the rooms in your story, but that is just one of many possibilities for Easter eggs that won't break copyright laws. A mobile home by a truck stop, lots of rain and no umbrellas, a watchmaker's shop...
I am very much looking forward to seeing how this all progresses. Keep it up, Jestur :)
Haha! Yeah, Dark is amazing. As much as I want to copy the greatness of Dark, this story will be different and not as crazy of a character tree. There's no way I can write a story as masterful done like those two did. I did take some inspiration from Dark, of course, and tons of other similar media, but I'm trying to make it somewhat unique. I'm glad your enjoyed it and I'll try to sneak some more Easter eggs in, in the future. Thanks for playing!
Recommendation: don't start with a wall of backstory. I know many do it, but not bc it's good, rather bc it is easy. It's very poor narrative, and also completely unnecessary. All the info comes naturally in the story when relevant, sometimes with just a lil tweak.
Yeah, I agree. I already plan to remaster ep1 and I want to do away with the disposition as the beginning and slowly put the information into the first episode. I have no writing experience and this is my first attempt so I'm learning as I go. I know it's pretty dumb to try to start with a story like this. But hey, we learn from our mistakes. Thanks for the recommendation. I hope you enjoyed the game.
When is chapter 4 or 3/2 coming out?
0.35 public release should be July 15
Sweet